Dream Deep

... I have only one real comment on this, Crewgurl, and I think it's something you might want to look at as far as characterization goes. If Emma is driving ...

Haha, just downloaded the whole thing and listened to it at once... and I suddenly realize that we have entirely different versions of the Tower That Ate People . Gabriels ...

As I've been away from this for a while, I'll take it from where I left off - Page 4's second post. Sorry again and so forth for taking so ...

xD I can't wait for more. Incidentally, did you purposely name the correspondent after the author of "White Oleander?" ... I thought that was Janet Fitch ...

... I would have to agree with those who posted ahead of me. Profane language works only in moderation, and even then one sometimes goes to far with it. To ...

And back and forth we go. ^_~ In any event, I would have to agree with Author on this one. I think its non-specificity is one of the aspects that ...

I would have to agree wtih Whence and Ennui - the concept of your poem is so obscured and hidden by the poor presentation that the reader gets distracted before ...

Privyet , Imp. Glad I found this - impish poetry always a delight, even if its not your preferred style (you've got an inborn tilt, I think, towards black alleys, ...

I wrote this for a YWS contest, Dream_Deep forced me to post it... *rolls eyes* Oh get over it. :razz: -- In any event, Till, I still think this is ...

... Hey Till, back for another round quickly - didn't have to leave quite as soon as I thought I would. In any event, now that I've got a moment ...

!_! You've honestly written this at ten years old ? ... if I wanted to nitpick, I would say that perhaps you could work on your flow a bit - ...

I already gave you my impressions of this series, but I would like to enthuse - yet again - over the 'warming the hearts of cold-hearted men'. Glorious repetition - ...

Hey Kel, nice to see you again. I was just skimming the site's front page and this caught my attention - not only did it catch it, but it also ...

o.0 Haha, but I read this before, on Messenger. On a note purely on topic... I have to say I think you've been listening to too much Mein Tiel . ...

This was, ah... not my type of poetry either. That's like reading really graphic Rammstein lyrics, without having to bother with translation. ... This, Till? This almost makes Rein Raus ...